March 2006
S M T W T F S
« Feb   Apr »
 1234
567891011
12131415161718
19202122232425
262728293031  
Working Moms!
Do you - like me - want to order a wife off Amazon? Well, we can't. So here's the next best thing to help you stay
CoolCalmConnected.

Operation Christmas Child Just One More - C'mon, make a box! And make a difference.
Hey - It's Us!
 
It's a mighty big world. Better have a sister to hold you.
"Life moves pretty fast. You don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it." Ferris Bueller
Philippians 4:4

Wave hello to San Antonio


Amazon's Gold Box
Polls

What's your favorite New Year's Eve dinner?

View Results

Loading ... Loading ...
Who's Online

10 visitors online now
10 guests, 0 members
Map of Visitors

Subscribe

The Ghost Dance

So I’ve been reading Ireland lately, a novel that weaves Irish legends into a modern day setting.  Really interesting.  And last night’s chapter offered a striking visual, one that I’ve mulled through the day The author recounted how poetry was first created in Ireland.  A witch instructed a tongue-tied, love-struck man to look skyward and pull words from the air, because every single word that everyone has ever said is floating there – swirling, colliding, drifting – awaiting a master’s hand to craft an emotion.

Lois, 12, wrote and illustrated this poem tonight as a homework assignment.  The drawing is wispy – muted – ghostly.  The scan may be hard to read; I’ll enter the text below.

The Ghost Dance

At midnight,
Inside the haunted house,
Toward the kitchen,
Around the corner,
Beyond the dining room,
Up the old steps,
Behind the doors,
Near the bed,
To the right,
In the closet,
Past the clothes,
Through the hidden door,
Into the ballroom,
The ghosts are dancing.

lois_-poem

I really had to search for these shadowy characters – an exhausting search - but her words led me to them, like a poetic trail blazed in a writer’s light.  I finally found them behind that hidden door.  And they’re dancing, swirling around the cloistered ballroom floor like the words that describe them had been celestially swirling moments before.

The tongue-tied Irishman won the love of his life with his poetry.

Maybe the rest of us simply live with the love of poetry, offering an occassional heavenward glance in search of the elusive words that might describe it.

Share

5 Responses to “The Ghost Dance”

  • Kate:

    What entrancing expression from your almost-teen. WTG, Lois! p.s. I may have to check out that novel, as well :)

  • Lois:

    Why is it that everytime I do anything for school I get a parade, but whenever I do something for no reason I don’t even get dinner? I think I’m picking up some negative vibes here…..

  • Maria:

    Who said you don’t learn something new every day. Thanks for sharing. I think you’ve got a gifted child on your hands……..feed the poor child:)

  • Rachel:

    lois, im not going to lie. youre really wierd. i am obviously adopted and me and guanna could start a club. its called the: thank god were not really related to them, club. anyone not with lois**#** dna can join.

  • Sharon:

    Is it at a sanatorium? I think I saw that episode on Ghost Hunters!

Print This Post Print This Post